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		<title>Matthias Scharwies: Matthias Scharwies verschob die Seite Englisch/Writing/Comment nach Writing/Comment, ohne dabei eine Weiterleitung anzulegen</title>
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		<updated>2022-04-25T18:20:19Z</updated>

		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;Matthias Scharwies verschob die Seite &lt;a href=&quot;/index.php?title=Englisch/Writing/Comment&amp;amp;action=edit&amp;amp;redlink=1&quot; class=&quot;new&quot; title=&quot;Englisch/Writing/Comment (Seite nicht vorhanden)&quot;&gt;Englisch/Writing/Comment&lt;/a&gt; nach &lt;a href=&quot;/wiki/Writing/Comment&quot; title=&quot;Writing/Comment&quot;&gt;Writing/Comment&lt;/a&gt;, ohne dabei eine Weiterleitung anzulegen&lt;/p&gt;
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		<author><name>Matthias Scharwies</name></author>
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		<title>Matthias Scharwies: kat geändert</title>
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		<updated>2018-10-31T16:11:37Z</updated>

		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;kat geändert&lt;/p&gt;
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				&lt;td colspan=&quot;2&quot; style=&quot;background-color: #fff; color: #202122; text-align: center;&quot;&gt;Version vom 31. Oktober 2018, 16:11 Uhr&lt;/td&gt;
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		<title>Matthias Scharwies: N</title>
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		<updated>2018-10-14T08:24:33Z</updated>

		<summary type="html">&lt;p&gt;N&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;Neue Seite&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;div&gt;== Start with ... ==&lt;br /&gt;
* a &amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;short&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039; anecdote, that &amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;quickly&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039; leads into the topic&lt;br /&gt;
* an interesting question - which is then answered by you&lt;br /&gt;
* a personal statement / your main thesis (which often directly results from a &amp;quot;Discuss&amp;quot;-Topic given to you)and a &amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;reason why you think it is important&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&lt;br /&gt;
* a &amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;surprising&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039; fact/statistic that &amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;asks for an explanation&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039; or supports your main thesis&lt;br /&gt;
* a short definition of the problem you are asked to discuss as you see it&lt;br /&gt;
* a short analysis of the message/your understanding of the quotation you are to discuss&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
== Check if your introduction ==&lt;br /&gt;
* introduces the topic quickly and clearly (+)&lt;br /&gt;
* gives readers an idea of what direction the essay will take  (+)&lt;br /&gt;
* provides an overview of the structure/line of argument  (+)&lt;br /&gt;
* implies/poses a question and creates an expectation/interetst in the readers  (+)&lt;br /&gt;
* states general truths/defines what needs no definition  (-)&lt;br /&gt;
* asks questions/announces answers but does not give them  (-)&lt;br /&gt;
&lt;br /&gt;
== Introductions to an essay - examples (with comments)==&lt;br /&gt;
* [[Media:quote-essay.pdf |Writing Essays on Quotes]] (pdf)&lt;br /&gt;
* [[Media:introductionssience.pdf|Negative example of an essey on science]] (pdf)&lt;br /&gt;
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